and here's my friend the other author on the book saying something on the book.
Thursday, May 31, 2012
Mizuki (Update) Videos
A quick promotion from me to you fans out there.
Slowing down
Recently I have posted my character Bio's and they have been littered with things that happen later on in the story or in other books that I plan on putting out. I'm currently slowing down and covering my basis in my first story.
It will take a little time but I'll shave a lot of stuff down so that it makes more sense
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PS. Everything that I have presented here isn't final I am constantly changing characters and story plots.
It will take a little time but I'll shave a lot of stuff down so that it makes more sense
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PS. Everything that I have presented here isn't final I am constantly changing characters and story plots.
Tuesday, May 29, 2012
Factions and Timeline
I'm currently working on the Factions of the people and recently just finished the Timeline for the characters and the events that will happen in the story.
I will post all of that information up soon, but I'm still need to proof read everything before I post it.
I will post all of that information up soon, but I'm still need to proof read everything before I post it.
Tuesday, May 15, 2012
Lain the forgotten
Lain
Name: Lain the forgotten
Nickname: Lain
Age: immortal
Birth month and day: beginning of time
Status: God
Height: can freely change
Weight: can freely change
Hair color: black
Eyes color: Grayish-blue
Favorite color: Purple
Blood type: none
Nickname: Lain
Age: immortal
Birth month and day: beginning of time
Status: God
Height: can freely change
Weight: can freely change
Hair color: black
Eyes color: Grayish-blue
Favorite color: Purple
Blood type: none
Likes: Alexander Payne
Dislikes: everything else
Personality:
Lain is a very prideful god thinking very little for what
other people think of her, but she does try to win people over with good deed.
She doesn’t really like humans but she does do things that help there benefit. She
literally brought people back from the brinks of death to calm there
About Lain:
Lain was one of the
original gods who created the universe, because she was one of original gods
that lead to creating the world she knows full well how people react and how
they see things. She is very smart and wise, but she is also very short
tempered when it comes to people who can’t accept how the natural order of things
work or do things in the gods name. Such people who use their names for their own
benefit or people who try to hurt people because they feel the gods told them
to.
Appearance:
Before she came into
the world she had the appearance of a fox with a brownish red coat and black
paws and a white mouth, she has 12 tails each with a small blue flame on the
tip of her tails. As she created the world and made worlds and planets and
stars her appearance and body began to become more human, while her face and
features still resembled her fox form appears as a mixture of both a fox and a
human. She wore imperial godly robes and clothes to cover her body.
In her human form
she is a small woman around 5 feet’ 8 inches tall, and has short hair; her eyes
are light green with a yellow hue on the inside of her pupils.
When she fell from
power she converted back in her animal form where she would walk the lands as a
fox that plagued the people. She still had enough power to enter her human form
but only for a limited time.
Powers and Abilities:
Lain is a higher being than most gods that you come across
in the story, but her powers have been severely cut down due to she has little
connection to the souls that come from her Dimension and planet.
But even with this limit
This is one of the main concepts for on of the main Characters, She is suppose to have some great connection to the main character "Alexander" and her story effects everything around Alexander and his friends.
Right now I'm still in the concept faze so this appearance might not be final.
Small updates
I been taking my time with working on my story, trying to figure how to make it less confusing when people read it. I think I finally made some progress on making it more understandable, but I can't say for sure until I actually get some other people to read my story and see what they think.
So for now I'm going to post up some pictures and see if they can at the very least give you an idea of how some of the characters will look.
So for now I'm going to post up some pictures and see if they can at the very least give you an idea of how some of the characters will look.
Monday, April 16, 2012
Magic system (will update soon)
MAGIC
There have been some questions as to how magic came to
work in this world, and how it came to be. Most of the magic isn't necessarily
magic but just blessings that are granted by some of the gods. In the earlier
days people would have fought and trained their bodies to gain tribute to have
access to such powers, but after swift millennia the new generation of the gods
came to be. The newer gods selected their followers by how much potential they
would possess the battlefield or by how much faith they would present.
Plantation of how it currently WORKS:
Blessings that are passed on to the followers or pact
makers, by its very loyalty they show the certain god they praise. The forces
the newer gods channel and control are affected by the wills of their followers
– the higher the influence of a god can magnifying the very powers that dwell
in the bodies in their followers and pact makers granting them superhuman
abilities. This has an actual physical effect on the some who stronger faiths
than others, slowly modifying their forms. The greater the amount of energy
that eventually passes through their followers or pact makers, the greater the
transformation.
-the connections that are held between a god and the
follower is weaker than what the connections between the god and pact maker.
Followers like most others are entitled to the same powers a pact maker has,
but the connection can't grow stronger than a tenth of the god they worship.
This means that the will of a pact maker can grow to the same percentage of the
god they are packed with-
Oddly enough a fallen god can also have followers and
persuade them and twist their minds and push forth their anger turning them
into horrible, mindless, killing machines. This cans me dangerous because the
people who partake in these forms of blessings have no emotions and over time
their persona's turn into blank, featureless face. Others might grow a third
eye that allows them to see the magic around them, or extra limbs, or a set of
spines along their back. Remember the gods? They changed shape because of their
immense power.
Now here’s how it really works:
Magic
The magic in
this world is a little different that how most people are used to seeing; most
of the magic in this world comes from the gods themselves. These so called gods
bless the devoted people in this world into their divine worshipers on the
planet giving them certain abilities that resemble their own to some degree.
The chosen worshipers
Chosen
worshipers are people who have supernatural powers that are linked to one of
the gods and have powers similar to what there god has. The chosen worshipers
are connected all of the worlds there god controls and are the soldiers that
fight for their gods beliefs. The powers
they receive from their gods themselves and they carry their message and word
with them when they fight.
The main purpose
for worshipers to exist is to fight for the god’s namesake and is there to
protect the innocent humans that inhabit the earth. They fight against the
monsters that inhabit the god worlds and the monsters that are on earth as
well.
Each god has their
own set of worshipers and they spread their name to the people on earth. They
manage temples and churches that take up the earthly names they were given and
act as the back bone for directing the souls of the dead to their designated
heaven.
This idea
stands firm for the Noire family as well; the family has had ties to the gods
of light for as long as they carried the name Noire. Their grandparents had
ties to these gods and the god’s powers spread to the children giving them
powers.
Blood Pacts
A blood pact
is when a human's spirit becomes connected to a god that was weakened under
certain circumstances. The action of making a pact with a god is rare and this
can only happen with weakened gods who are summoned to earth. When the pact is
activated the human gains the powers of the god that they hold the pact with,
people who do this become godlike and are primary targets of other gods.
In order for a
blood pact to be initiated a weakened or fallen god is summoned by human sacrifice.
Through this sacrifice the god inhabits the body of the sacrifice using it as a
host body, once in the host body they cut their hand and become blood brothers
with the person who summoned them.
When these god
has made its pact with the person who summoned them, they gain are pushed up to
a godlike status and have access to all of the gods abilities, world,
worshipers, and the power that comes from there dimension. This ritual makes it
so that the god can stay on the earth with the summoner using the host body as
a bridge to keep them there, however if the summoner dies and has there soul
taken they will convert back into nothing and the host body will fall to the
ground as a soulless husk.
These rules
are different for Lain Ashira and Alexander; because he was stabbed with the
knife that was used to sacrifice Ashira the ritual had a different outcome.
Ashira's spirit merged with Lain making them one and the same being, and
because Alexander’s blood was still on the knife when she was killed; he became
the linked with the two women as well. Difference being that because the ritual
was done differently than the others, Lain and Ashira's connection to Alexander
was slow. Over time the connection did grow stronger showing their progress in
the dreams that he had every night about the woman of light that would appear
in his dreams. When the connection was finally complete he became a target for
the monsters of Lain's old world to prove that he was the rightful leader of
the world, and was an enemy of all of the other Gods of light who wanted Lain
to remain powerless.
Holy objects
Holy objects
are weapons and items that are given to a certain few of worshipers that have
proven that they are worthy to that god. These weapons vary on appearance and
enhance the natural abilities of the people who wield them. These weapons feed
off of the natural energy in the human body so normal people shouldn’t be using
the weapon, if a weakened person does use this weapon it could lead to their
death or could put them into a coma.
These weapons
are sometimes pass them through the family tree, and they raise their children
to use these weapons so they can keep their connections to their god
strong.
Monday, April 2, 2012
Ashira noire (profile)
Ashira
Noire
Name: Ashira R. Noire
Nickname: Shira
Age: 19(died) 22(currently)
Birth month and day: December 26th, 1988
Status: Student/ God host
Height: 5’6
Weight: 128
Hair color: black
Eyes color: Grayish-blue
Favorite color: Purple
Blood type: A-
Nickname: Shira
Age: 19(died) 22(currently)
Birth month and day: December 26th, 1988
Status: Student/ God host
Height: 5’6
Weight: 128
Hair color: black
Eyes color: Grayish-blue
Favorite color: Purple
Blood type: A-
Likes: Alexander Payne, her brothers
Dislikes: Kiwi fruit, Violent movies.
Personality:
Ashira has a very innocent outlook on life, she was always
careless and just saw the good in things. She is very kind but at times she has
become very outspoken telling people who things are. (She told her brother Nick
to ease up on Alexander, because he at least tried to save her)
About Ashira:
Coming back into the world as a spirit Ashira gets a chance
to live her life again; her body is now a pool of water. Because her body is
mostly water and her connection is still fresh she has to stay within a certain
radius of Alexander or else her body will turn into a pool of water. Ashira's
being serves as an anchor point for the god Lain and keeps her connected to
Alexander keeping Lain and herself in this world, over time she her consciences
begins to fade. This deeply bothers her
but over time she starts to accept it, the solution to this is making her a
divine servant making her spirit stronger and she can now freely go anywhere
she wants.
Appearance:
Even though Ashira is a spirit who doesn't have a flesh and
blood body anymore, she appears to be in her early twenties. She has a round
face slider body, plump lips, and light gray eye her appearance befitting the
new look world. Ashira has long very long hair extending down to past her
shoulders, but she is mostly seen with a ponytail in her head.
In her youth Ashira was very girly wearing a lot of fashionable
clothing that matched everything she wore. When she re-enters the world she is
wearing a dark purple button up shirt, dark pants, and black shoes with purple
marking on them.
Powers and Abilities:
Early in her life she did have super natural abilities but
she did really flaunt them over other people.
Following: her soul is linked with Lain and they are
connected with Alexander through a blood pact.
Story:
Story:
Ark
Beginning Ark:
She begins the story dead and it
moves, but shortly after the introductions are done she comes back into the
story after her body reforms. She then takes her time to figure how she came
back into this world and she breaks the tension between Alexander and Nick because
he knows a lot about the family history.
From ghost to
goddess:
Ashira
begins to have problems keeping her liquid body intact and falls apart, she
also passes out for long periods of time and Lain takes over. This is due to
Lain is regaining so much of her power over the long years they have been
together. To save her from burning away the connection to Lain’s plant is
restored, giving Alexander to convert her spirit into an angel making her his
Divine Servant.
Pact user vs. the
universe:
Around this
point in the story she becomes a Divine servant of the highest caliber and uses
her powers goes undercover with Fiara to find out about the new god order “The
Light Bringers.”
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